User talk:Indraprasetyo

Hunting Strategy

In case you haven't noticed, your writeup for the Cape Clawed hunting strategy section was removed not for the fun of it, but because it failed on a few counts. If you had bothered to read the discussion page here and the Recent Changes, you would have learnt why. It is one big chunk of text with extremely poor flow, bad grammar, and presents your own one sided view of what players should do. Furthermore, it consists of advice that belong to other locations. Your consecutive, minor edits to the page showed that you had little idea what you wanted to write. 3 editors had to spend the time reading through your edits, and came to the same conclusion. Any further reverts on the article back to the poor writeup, will be deemed as vandalism, and reported as such to the developers.

Now if you really want to help, read up the Editor's Corner set of documents, and have a good look around the other articles on the way things should be written up. Mostly, keep your personal comments off the writeups, and present it in a neutral manner showing all available point of views and possibilities. Text that attempts to direct players in any gameplay style is unacceptable, such as "using trap with power equal or less than 3000 is useless". -- Grexx 12:38, 28 September 2009 (UTC)